I don’t relish you neither us
If you do not for me,
My dull memories crawl away at night in your absence
Practice my non existence
I’ve laid as a slave to your sleep for too long
I get your distance
Your name does register what I miss when
A simple utterance is mentioned
Can you hear me, just listen
Have thou been given a sentence
To uphold this like the life span of those bars
If I ripped the concrete would you then need me
I can’t expect you to betray your life
So I must disappear like lost thoughts
But hopefully WE can be rethought or
Recollected in truth because
What I relish is
To not lay a gentle finger upon you
If you do not for me,
My dull memories crawl away at night in your absence
Practice my non existence
I’ve laid as a slave to your sleep for too long
I get your distance
Your name does register what I miss when
A simple utterance is mentioned
Can you hear me, just listen
Have thou been given a sentence
To uphold this like the life span of those bars
If I ripped the concrete would you then need me
I can’t expect you to betray your life
So I must disappear like lost thoughts
But hopefully WE can be rethought or
Recollected in truth because
What I relish is
To not lay a gentle finger upon you
6 comments:
Brilliant mate!!! Ah, nice to see that you have been more careful while typing this one.
I have noticed that you had the feel and passion. It was your urgency in typing that would ruin the reading experience.
These lines - "I can’t expect you to betray your life
So I must disappear like lost thoughts
But hopefully WE can be rethought or
Recollected in truth because
What I relish is
To not lay a gentle finger upon you"
Stunning!!! Keep writing!!!
I like this alot.
thank you for the comment on my last entry I'm you glad you like it :)
keep writingg!
thanks alot i really appreciate it both of you
This was great.
You could see it your heart and that brings it to life.
Hey!
Thank you for what you said about my post...I like this a lot...as "Walker" said, it really have a lot of life. It's really nice.
You said what I wrote started off like poetry, and I didn't even intend that! I do love poetry though, and I write a lot:
http://sadxaffairs.deviantart.com/gallery/#poetry-
I hope to read more from you. :)
well i hope you do read more of my work i mean thats what i write for lol and thanks so so much
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