Passionate touches
our blood rushes
and luscious kisses touch her hips
and her stomach and her breast
kissing the tension off her neck
and I kiss in a way that my lips submissively
cushion her skin as i softly press them to her flesh
and separate me lips on her neck after kiss
so she can feel me breathe for a sec
and think about the passion intimacy erect
taste me oh heavenly creature
that is you woman
I'll climb the levels of earth that is life
to taste the night
savor your light
while you devour my might
making a king weak at his site
but inflamed inside you
daring to breath your essence
I'll count back from eleven
from each orgasmic conception
that I pull from releasing your intercepting
dam walls
the walls housing my passion fruit cologne
the true beautiful smell of my own
"You"
and I will wear you in my dreams
after love scenes
when everything seems to find time
to lay in bliss
Passionate touches
our blood rushes
and luscious kisses touch her hips
and her stomach and her breast
kissing the tension off her neck
and i kiss in a way that my lips submissively
cushion her skin as i softly press them to her flesh
and separate me lips on her neck after kiss
so she can feel me breathe for a sec
and think about the passion intimacy erects
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7 comments:
Ah, I am judging from another post of yours, you are pretty good at this theme. You really are.
This song is quite... dirty. Or, must I say, "wicked!". And, yea, that is a complement, okay.
You COULD break the central piece into 2 verses. Wait, we are talking about songwriting here, aren't we?
This line is quite strong -
"I will where you in my dreams"
But, you used the wrong word. I think you meant "wear" and not "where".
Overall, it is good!!! Keep writing!!!
On second reading, I think you are better off leaving the central piece as one verse as you have managed to establish a good, sexy, continuity there.
You don't want to interrupt the sexual act, do you? Hehe.
Keep writing!!!
i will keep writing and it's poetry but i would love for someone to sing it though, and i love you comments, thank you so much
Wow another poem that leaves you completely speechless and with shivers running up your arms because of how amazing it is!
Love it
X
thanks i'm glad you took the time out to read it, that really means alot
while i read ths poem, i only thought of one person. you must have a true gift for me to gather all the emotions i have for my someonespecial* & get the might to call him up lol
im quite the poet but never really elaborated thm up here. you give me inspiration to do so.
blessings to you & yours <3
thanks I really appreciate it and spreading love feels pretty good also
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