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I'm Lejon Mumford from Detroit Michgan. I'm 17 about to be 18 on Nov 28th. I love writing poetry and I actually started after my father passed away in December of 2006. I wrote a poem in his Obituary that i thought was really good, and it took me three months to write again and my baby inspired it in march when i wrote a poem about my father on the internet. It sparked a lot of comments on Facebook so i pretty much have been writing ever since. Although since then my writing abilities have grown and using my two favorite rappers (Eminem, Lupe) I have pulled inspiration from their lyrics time and time again. Oh and i really have gotten alot of inspiration out of Linkin Park also. When I write I'm able to become any one, which means it's a different point of view thus my name becomes Notion because I am a living concept or depiction of everything when I'm holding my pen.

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Thursday, April 2, 2009

A Lips Touch Can Talk


Passionate touches
our blood rushes
and luscious kisses touch her hips
and her stomach and her breast
kissing the tension off her neck
and I kiss in a way that my lips submissively
cushion her skin as i softly press them to her flesh
and separate me lips on her neck after kiss
so she can feel me breathe for a sec
and think about the passion intimacy erect

taste me oh heavenly creature
that is you woman
I'll climb the levels of earth that is life
to taste the night
savor your light
while you devour my might
making a king weak at his site
but inflamed inside you
daring to breath your essence
I'll count back from eleven
from each orgasmic conception
that I pull from releasing your intercepting
dam walls
the walls housing my passion fruit cologne
the true beautiful smell of my own
"You"
and I will wear you in my dreams
after love scenes
when everything seems to find time
to lay in bliss

Passionate touches
our blood rushes
and luscious kisses touch her hips
and her stomach and her breast
kissing the tension off her neck
and i kiss in a way that my lips submissively
cushion her skin as i softly press them to her flesh
and separate me lips on her neck after kiss
so she can feel me breathe for a sec
and think about the passion intimacy erects


7 comments:

Brosreview said...

Ah, I am judging from another post of yours, you are pretty good at this theme. You really are.

This song is quite... dirty. Or, must I say, "wicked!". And, yea, that is a complement, okay.

You COULD break the central piece into 2 verses. Wait, we are talking about songwriting here, aren't we?

This line is quite strong -
"I will where you in my dreams"
But, you used the wrong word. I think you meant "wear" and not "where".

Overall, it is good!!! Keep writing!!!

Brosreview said...

On second reading, I think you are better off leaving the central piece as one verse as you have managed to establish a good, sexy, continuity there.

You don't want to interrupt the sexual act, do you? Hehe.

Keep writing!!!

Notion said...

i will keep writing and it's poetry but i would love for someone to sing it though, and i love you comments, thank you so much

They Just Call Her Helen said...

Wow another poem that leaves you completely speechless and with shivers running up your arms because of how amazing it is!

Love it

X

Notion said...

thanks i'm glad you took the time out to read it, that really means alot

-- // lethalpoi$on said...

while i read ths poem, i only thought of one person. you must have a true gift for me to gather all the emotions i have for my someonespecial* & get the might to call him up lol

im quite the poet but never really elaborated thm up here. you give me inspiration to do so.

blessings to you & yours <3

Notion said...

thanks I really appreciate it and spreading love feels pretty good also