Stop playing and give me your essence
I want you to bless it with your lips and tongue
i want to hear your moans and songs only sung
at the highest pitches
baby i know
believe me i know you have fetishes about me massaging your jaws
and in them i pause while you stroke it orally
with your lips smoothing over every shape of me
it's long and to the deepest parts of your throat i'll proceed
wet it...
I know it's your fetish to have your mouth erupt with me
taste my essence and treasure
how does that old saying go
"eat your heart out"
"eat your heart out"
cuz i'll eat you out till your heart screams for my pleasings
and your result can drip from my lips
and i'll french you
while my hand lynches you
and i'm hitting your pressure points like i've been so tempted too
i have sentenced you to
life without pleasureless nights
and i know you won't put up a fight because
because i t hink the quickest way to your heart was through your stomach
and i know i reached it, i touched it,
I felt your moans in it before your lips released a sound
and baby this love is drugs
your going to be strung out on just my name
Say Raimone but let yo tongue roll when you do it
cuz while i'm doing it
your going to be losing it
until there is no nut inside just wet orgasms
and you won't have to worry
cuz i know you'll wan to pay for something that good
but i'll reasure you that it's on me
all of it ...
9 comments:
I've wrote this before. You're quite good at such steaming themes. Keep at it!!!
i will thanks
lol gosh ..this was a very dirty piece. I felt like my mom should be covering my eyes.
Nonetheless, the word play was excellent. You're a very good writer. I'm rather impressed!
It really started to pick up for me in the middle, where you had a lot of internal rhyming going on. That's when it started to feel sincere for me... sincere in the sense that I believed what the poet was going through.
"[I] know you won't put up a fight because
because i t hink the quickest way"
Is that "because" supposed to be there twice? Just bringing it to your attention, Ms. Notion. From one writer to another, I really did liked this one, though.
I am i guy though lol but thanks for the support i didn't know about posting this one but i said what the hell why not and yes it was suppose to be there twice, and thanks so much for following
Ah, my bad. When I saw "Rose Colored Chocolate" on the right side of the site, I assumed you were her. No doubt, though... honest mistake. Just a little awkward is all, haha.
nope non taken that's my woman though it's all cool thanks for stopping by tough
Addictive in true sense !!! awesome lines !!
and nice header too :)
lol thanks
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