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I'm Lejon Mumford from Detroit Michgan. I'm 17 about to be 18 on Nov 28th. I love writing poetry and I actually started after my father passed away in December of 2006. I wrote a poem in his Obituary that i thought was really good, and it took me three months to write again and my baby inspired it in march when i wrote a poem about my father on the internet. It sparked a lot of comments on Facebook so i pretty much have been writing ever since. Although since then my writing abilities have grown and using my two favorite rappers (Eminem, Lupe) I have pulled inspiration from their lyrics time and time again. Oh and i really have gotten alot of inspiration out of Linkin Park also. When I write I'm able to become any one, which means it's a different point of view thus my name becomes Notion because I am a living concept or depiction of everything when I'm holding my pen.

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Tuesday, April 28, 2009

I didn't know


I didn’t know I was saying goodbye to you
When I gave you tangible intangible love
What I gave you was beyond words but I’ll try to describe
Using these lips and
If I could describe your body the way I wanted too
It would be like four lines worth of ellipses
Starting off with the line
She was like an hour glass under a chocolate water fall
Where the sand froze in space because
Because time itself had to double take at such a creature being inside itself
You have never felt love so strong
When I stripped you of that lace bra and thong
Keep the high hills on
Baby
I saw the sun and the moon collide in your eyes
As our bodies held together so tightly
Baby
I’ve never been so close too…
So joined with in…
So connected in sync…
So far got damn deep…
So on the brink of passing the walls your body denies me reach
But I’m already feeling your stomach
So there is no need
Right there I gripped the bed
And I fed you a dream
Full of leaps and bounds off of skyscrapers
Attached together by the mountains stemming from the ocean floors
And right before you enter my seas
I told you without a word
Just a glance
To never worry and that I would keep you
For all time
Your mine
You looked at me with such awe in your eyes
But not with surprise
But with a look of acceptance
When you shook I held you
And told my baby I love her
I love her so much
I love you
That was the last time I ever saw you
And held you
And felt you
That was when I said goodbye to Love
Hopefully we’ll love again

22 comments:

Walker said...

Very nice post.
Loved the visuals
Memories are burned in forever after being in the arms of a desire you held

Couture Carrie said...

I love the repetition in this poem; it makes a powerful impact. Beautiful painting too!

xoxox,
CC

Ms. Butterfly said...

You paint as well? I like this poem makes me wonder who did you say good-bye to?

Thanks for the compliment on my poem. You've brought that out in me ;)

Scarlet said...

And with that taste, you will do whatever it takes to feel it again.

Excellent writing!
You are truly talented.
Thank you for sharing your most intimate thoughts with us.

Sachin Malhotra said...

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TheGlamorousEccentric said...

wow beautiful words

Notion said...

thank you all and most people don't see this as my most intimate thoughts but it is i'm just glad i got some great readers

Walker: your right

Carrie: thanks

Ms. Butterfly: well i'm glad to have helped

Scarlet: i think i will

Sachin: I will

the glamorous eccentric: thank you

shakari x Trak Girl said...

beautiful poem

emma said...

beautiful poem!

mojo.espenilla said...

That was beautiful xx

Notion said...

Shakari, Mojo, and Emma,: thank you so much for the support

Adrienne S. said...

You're an amazing poet. Just amazing. It's always beautiful to see a man express himself this way. Thanks for introducing me to your blog!

Just Some Girl said...

thankyou for the comment and that is a common sense option :)

Beautiful words you've written there.

Breezi F said...

Ilove this. You are so great with expressing yourself. Very visual!

Teneille said...

beautiful!!

Fashion_Gurl said...

I like this i write lyrics too..check my blog out follow.....

Smaragd said...

awesome poem!

how can u be 17 and this deep? lol

u really should get rid of this word verification dude! been at this 3hrs! aargh.

Sweet Pea said...

I like this one Notion...^_^

Sachin Malhotra said...

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Preetilata【ツ】 said...

tangible-intangible love ........ i loved this line :)

Robyn said...

hi
loved this post.
pic fits just right.

Notion said...

thanks all of you who commented and i will get rid of verification thing i hate it too